Re: [ncc-charter] new words - where from?

From: Dany Vandromme (vandrome@renater.fr)
Date: Wed Aug 30 2000 - 22:39:53 PDT

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    On Tue, 29 Aug 2000, Kent Crispin wrote:

    > On Tue, Aug 29, 2000 at 07:28:41PM +0200, Dany Vandromme wrote:
    > > On Tue, 29 Aug 2000, Adam Peake wrote:
    > >> Shouldn't we be using the February 2000 version of the charter as the basis
    > >> for amendments?
    > > -
    > > After I made changes to the initial draft, I would prefer you point out
    > > the changes suggested by Raul if they are significant. I would not redo
    > > the changes again, otherwise I will not get it done before next week.
    > > Thanks
    > > Dany
    >
    > Dany, there are *many* significant differences, starting with the
    > title, and in my opinion we really cannot use the old charter as a
    > base. In the interests of time, I have edited your changes into
    > Raul's last posted version and posted it on the web site.
    -
    OK for me
    -
    >
    > I did make a couple of small changes, and interspersed a couple of notes
    > about things that need to be fixed, IMHO. In particular, I marked the
    > new text about political parties, since that is a fairly substantial
    > addition, and I thought it should be highlighted. I also introduced the
    > abbreviation "AdCom", and used it in several places. I reworded the
    > segue following the "running mates" proposal so that it just flows
    > naturally into the following section, and marked it as an addition
    > rather than as an alternate, since the "AdCom selects" proposal is
    > not optional -- it is present in all versions.
    >
    -
    thanks
    -
    > Kent
    >
    > --
    > Kent Crispin "Do good, and you'll be
    > kent@songbird.com lonesome." -- Mark Twain
    >

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